Professor feedback on the previous project order number 374661837 was deemed unsatisfactory. Please, read the comments carefully and follow the essay instructions. Especially pay close attention to citation and bibliography standards in ST 22-2.
First, proper citation and bibliography are required to meet the academic standards in ST 22-2 and the assignment instructions. Second, your thesis is unclear. Address ONE material and ONE organizational solution upfront. Review the F100 Discussion Board. There is a thread in there specifically about the F111A Final Essay that can help.
This final essay is NOT a history paper, nor is it a regurgitation of the current FM model. Do NOT simply restate the FM process; the F103A and F106A short essays check comprehension. Apply the current processes to what happened in one of the historical capability gaps. Demonstrate you understand the concepts behind the current process even though the current FM process is not what was used in the 1970’s. Use the historical events to demonstrate you can apply the current concepts to the actions/decisions of the historical capability gap. It is a comparative analysis between what happened in the past and today’s process.